badger11 Posted December 21, 2009 Share Posted December 21, 2009 (edited) Today all day delay. Tonight you say to play. No need to feed with haste, relax with time to taste. Deny, refine with spice, and all your dreams define with simple sleep to secret heat so deep. I close your eyes with care, comb your hair so fine, so fair. I kiss your lips to please, today to tease with ease your curves so gentle so sweet. I draw the blinds – and sip your wine and find you smiling there - nice and tight - in something white - and you comb my hair -and close my lips -and seed my dreams - for enough delay today you say, now is the time to play. Edited December 21, 2009 by badger11 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted December 21, 2009 Share Posted December 21, 2009 Lyrical, sensual, dreamy -- the form complements the content perfectly, Badge. Thanks for sharing the poem. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted December 21, 2009 Author Share Posted December 21, 2009 Lyrical, sensual, dreamy -- the form complements the content perfectly, Badge. Thanks for sharing the poem. Tony Pleased it pleased, a pleasure in sharing :0) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted December 22, 2009 Share Posted December 22, 2009 It's lively, it plays in a quick rhythm, almost like dancing. And yes, sensual which always apprears in your poems. I was not quite sure of "Deny", though. That maybe due to my holiday fatique. Thanks for the light, relaxing write. Lake Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted December 23, 2009 Share Posted December 23, 2009 Badge, A delight! Sensual yes- but the essence of it- These lines: No need to feed with haste,relax with time to taste. Deny, refine with spice, really make clear the border between the sensuous and the simple needful. Well, well done! DC&J Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted December 23, 2009 Author Share Posted December 23, 2009 Thank you Dr C. and Lake. Pleased you enjoyed this attempt at some light entertainment. Best wishes for the festive period to you both. badge :0) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waxwings Posted December 28, 2009 Share Posted December 28, 2009 The words speak for themselves. My praises would pale before that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted December 30, 2009 Author Share Posted December 30, 2009 cheers ww badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted December 31, 2009 Share Posted December 31, 2009 Ah badge, I agree that this poem is sensual and lyrical. The rhythm is works so well. Deep and soft poem. Thank you sharing this poem. ALeksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted January 1, 2010 Author Share Posted January 1, 2010 Ah badge, I agree that this poem is sensual and lyrical. The rhythm is works so well. Deep and soft poem. Thank you sharing this poem. ALeksandra Thanks Aleks. This is my 'naughty' side. badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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