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Swap lines 3 and 4. I had to read poem four (4) times to finally enjoy the thought.

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Swap lines 3 and 4. I had to read poem four (4) times to finally enjoy the thought.

 

Where is line 4? Do you mean switching lines 2 and 3? If so, that makes sense.

I find it piercing, probably because of the word "ditch".

 

All the best.

 

Lake

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when I die,

so I'll taste the rain,

lay me face up in a ditch.

 

John, this is short, compact, beautiful. Good title and powerful lines.

I love this one.

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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