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rust

climbing steps to temple
rusty knees complain
while snow capped crown
gracefully bows low in gratitude
                    --Judi Van Gorder

An old one revised, revision inspired by Brendan's Mono no Aware.   Chinese genre xiaoshi

~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

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Wow Tinker, this is short and powerful. When I saw the title I guessed that it must be some inspiration by Brendan's poem. I read what you wrote there about Japanese and saba or rust of time. That was inspiring for me.

 

This poem captures with its own spirit and imagery. Thank you for sharing.

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

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Hi Tink,

 

 

The spirit triumphs over the body is the sense I got.

 

Thank you.

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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