dr_con Posted June 7, 2010 Share Posted June 7, 2010 That old black magic Seek the source of corruption Among the characters that curse are those who hiss and call confusing our fundamental right the collaboration between joy and life obscuring the Magic conflating the thought and abstract from this unknowable pre-logic rules and presumptive fact a deficit balanced a honey bee hovered a fiery red a wet Nasturtium bud a magical moment unsaid Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted June 7, 2010 Share Posted June 7, 2010 Even within the delicate balance of the unknowable pre-logic are those who hiss and call confusingour fundamental right to the point that they "conflate" and "obscure" the Magic. Disinformation and propaganda abound ... Well expressed, Juris! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dedalus Posted June 11, 2010 Share Posted June 11, 2010 (edited) Not what I thought: but ... (maybe) deficit balanced -- It's got a good ring, but it ain't the blues: My Baby, she be a honey bee ... rollin', rollin', fiery red; she be a sweet little flower she be lyin' (oooh!) on a purple bed. She say, you wanna come down, you wanna be ma Man, and I say, ahh, hoo, uff, umm, of course, just let me finish these Tax Returns and I'll be right with you. What the fuck and where is (haha!) my headband? Liverpool is down 1-0, holy shite, this is serious, nail-biting, catastrophic, and she thinks I want to have sex. The Mental. Characters. Moments: the pale sheen of perspiration on her brow was apparent but she held her head high and smiled upon all of us. I had thought she was not significant, the Ambassador's Lady, but from that moment I recognised the strain she was under and that the Ambassador was a fool, I knew that she was in fact more aware of a better course for the foreign policy of her country. The government wanted war; she ... Yes, well ... it was all so long ago. Women were politely shunted to the side. My nephew comes racing down on a skateboard. I look at him, he's fast, quite good, and I think, 'It's too early to die', and I'm not ready to die, not now. I could have done that in the War. Edited June 11, 2010 by dedalus Quote Drown your sorrows in drink, by all means, but the real sorrows can swim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted June 12, 2010 Share Posted June 12, 2010 Naturally I prefer the colours of the second page. badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted July 9, 2010 Share Posted July 9, 2010 Juris, I like when you are making good hidden points that are not so easy to find but can definitely be sensed. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted July 9, 2010 Author Share Posted July 9, 2010 Thanks all! Just part of the ongoing series- chapbook by October;-) (although this one in my opinion will probably be re-written as something wholly new;-) Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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