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JoelJosol

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The sea water stumbles,

falls

 

on your thighs,

clings the linen

 

tightly

on your skin,

 

sketching the shape

of your flesh

 

like fruits,

dew-washed,

 

in a glossy

spread.

 

The waves

keep pounding

 

your thighs,

glazed,

 

in this

early light.

"Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach

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Aleksandra

Here you use so nice expressions as: clings the linen, dew-washed

Passion here comes on top and that shows the wild calmness atmosphere when is written this poem

 

Thank you for sharing

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

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I like this one, too, Joel. Not that I care for the magazine, but you should submit this one to Sports Illustrated for inclusion in the swimsuit issue or to Victoria's Secret for use in a catalog. icon_lol.gif I imagine a model where sand meets the surf. icon_rolleyes.gif

 

Tony icon_wink.gif

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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Thank you, Aleksandra and Tony, for appreciating the quiet sensuality of the poem.

"Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach

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