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And I like her encouraging way, Juris! This one's a bit different for you, and I like it. Nice to see you ...

 

Tony :)

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All my poems are spells he says

I'm radioactive enough I muse

You can always be more

she replies folding

the pastry of our

conversation.

 

Hello Dr Con

Beautiful! precise, compact, a joy to read.

 

I love the metaphor;

You can always be more

she replied folding

the pastry of our

conversation

 

Best wishes

Rea

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Thanks All! I have been caught up in my own infinite drama- and have not been writing or critiquing as much as I should/would... So apologies for my absence hope to catch up with y'all soon-

 

Many Thanks for the continued support!

 

DC&J

Gate(less.thumb.png.dc23b19d2478d37a9f6fcdc563973026.pnghttps://conjurd.substack.com/welcome Come on over and check out my poetry substack y'all;-)

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Dr.Con, this was so nice short poem of yours. It surprised me. I am used on something else from you, but this one is not less beautiful than others. It's very well constructed, and it's nice to see how you handled it a big difference in your usual style.

 

:)

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

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David W. Parsley

Hi Doc, I tried to stay away, partly because I wanted this one to settle in, partly reluctant to overwrite No. 2 on No. 7 appreciation. But I have to say that this poem excites the kind of wonder and recurrent speculation that keeps me reading poetry. My only real difficulty is in localizing the he, she, and I of the piece, but that may just be part of how the poem means. Thanks for the experience.

 

- Dave

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