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bare skin

upon green grass

sunbathers bake and roll

enjoy their nudity before

a stray dog jumps out from the pool fountain

oh what a joy to rule the world of man

for just a moment and no more

watch them shiver at cold

daggers that splash

bare skin

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Dog's are the best! A competent and appropriate use of form, as always. And this one made me smile, to boot!

 

Tony

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Hi Tony. Yes, decastich no less :icon_sunny: I thought the two cinquains would mirror nicely the dog's moment of glory over puny mortals nearby. Benjamin

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bare skin

upon green grass

sunbathers bake and roll

enjoy their nudity before

a stray dog jumps out from the pool fountain

oh what a joy to rule the world of man

for just a moment and no more

watch them shiver at cold

daggers that splash

bare skin

 

Oh how I want to be that dog!

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Thanks DC&J and Franklin.

So many amusing little thoughts seem to go begging. B :icon_sunny:

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Frank E Gibbard

Delicious piece of whimsy, for some reason a pun of bear skin sounds as I read the title & repeat line, nice one quirky but true.

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

lol but true, i knew that or there had to be a catch to the a reason why the dog was mans and is mans best friend. now i know lol.

 

great bit of creativeness.

 

 

 

victor michael

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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