eclipse Posted July 9, 2011 Share Posted July 9, 2011 The old lighthouse kept me for many a year and through the moon, beauty's worth became clear. In childhood, my parents' lighthouse kept ships of beauty, ships of art and me apart. The light from my ghostly wife warns me of the angel of death who sits waiting on death's rock- can he not see my eyes are still lit? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted July 10, 2011 Share Posted July 10, 2011 Fascinating Eclipse- To my ear it sounded musical and yet a bit rough- But the cold dark images work- The scene is crystal clear, Ahh I stumbled on the repetition of Beauty- But thru no fault of yours- Rather the deeply buried disciplinarian came out- Loved the lyrical nature of this! DC&J Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted July 10, 2011 Share Posted July 10, 2011 lighthouses always fascinated me. beautify reflection with wonderful imagery. much enjoyed the read eclipse. victor michael Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted July 13, 2011 Share Posted July 13, 2011 Intriguing, Eclipse. I think it's significant that it is/was "my parents' lighthouse." Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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