eclipse Posted July 10, 2011 Share Posted July 10, 2011 On a Glasgow wall I sprayed an Abyssinian maid and a dulcimer she played. The next night reading Robbie Burns and Samuel Coleridge I heard an exotic melody, I sprayed the figure of Robbie Burns onto the wall holding a rose beneath a red moon. He stepped of the wall and asked me to spray his wife, she failed to come to life until Robbie sprayed the words of my love is like a red red rose. I etched the effigy of Samuel Coleridge onto the wall he stepped down- demanded and directed me to create a rose of intricate colour and texture-Coleridge demanded I draw an albatross and that this bird would be protected. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted July 13, 2011 Share Posted July 13, 2011 It appears some of these graffiti artists are not just talented, they're erudite. Enjoyed it, Eclipse. The ending especially made me smile. Tony :) Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted July 16, 2011 Share Posted July 16, 2011 eclipse- Although- I enjoy your poetry, I am often left wondering what to say... Not sure if you embody a certain imagist dream rationality or you skate on the cutting edge of rationality- The images are there- The structure is tight- but I leave feeling a ramble coming on- Hmmm... Enjoyed! DC&J Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted July 17, 2011 Share Posted July 17, 2011 A nice blend of urban art and culture which tempts the reader to different planes of thought. Benjamin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted July 17, 2011 Share Posted July 17, 2011 off the wall, fragmented, but enjoyed badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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