eclipse Posted July 20, 2011 Share Posted July 20, 2011 (edited) The tattooed clock on my back is ticking, the glass baby inside me is kicking, the wind helps me give birth to this exotic child of a different earth. Edited July 20, 2011 by eclipse Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted July 22, 2011 Share Posted July 22, 2011 A well executed brief and to the point imagist SF poem- Clear as a bell yet perfectly ephemeral food for the Fin de siècle gastronome to digest;-) DC&J Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted July 28, 2011 Share Posted July 28, 2011 love the word usage and play. opening and last liness are clever... victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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