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Aleksandra

I passed the bridge

created by you.

I found the pearl

hidden by you.

 

 

Then I saw myself

like a question

in your sentence.

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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goldenlangur

Hi Aleksandra,

 

 

This is both beautiful and powerful. I particularly love this

aleksandra wrote:

....

... I saw myself

like a question

in your sentence.

 

 

Wonderful to read this inspired work icon_smile.gif

 

goldenlangur

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Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

loved it enjoyed the ending.

 

vic

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Aleksandra
Hi Aleksandra,

 

 

This is both beautiful and powerful. I particularly love this

aleksandra wrote:

....

... I saw myself

like a question

in your sentence.

 

 

Wonderful to read this inspired work icon_smile.gif

 

goldenlangur

 

Thanks Golden. I am glad you like this poem. It is one of my favorite by me icon_smile.gif

 

Aleks

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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Aleksandra
aleks, I think this is my favorite of your work so far. It says so much in so few words. And the last lines are brilliant. I wish I could write something like this.

 

~~Tink

 

Tink thank you so much for your lovely words on this poem. I love to write the lapidary poems. I was used on that style in the past, I mean in Macedonian language. And this one is old more than 5 years - for sure. And the origin is in Macedonian language, this is just translation. And I am glad just because of that, bc I see this one works in English language too.

 

Thank you for reading

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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Aleksandra

Thank you Victor my dear. The ending yes - it is universal, we are all some questions in someones " sentences "

 

aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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I passed the bridge

created by you.

I found the pearl

hidden by you.

 

 

Then I saw myself

like a question

in your sentence.

 

 

This one is compact, Alek -- I like that! icon_smile.gif The pearl was hidden, but you nevertheless looked for it. icon_wink.gif Was it meant to be found?

 

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Aleksandra

Ha icon_biggrin.png what a question. Did you get the point of the poem now icon_biggrin.png? I am now question in some of yours thoughts icon_biggrin.png.

Everything what is hidden is hidden to not be found. So the " pearl " too. icon_razz.gif

 

Thank you Tony. I am glad that you think this is compact.

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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aleksandra wrote:

 

....

... I saw myself

like a question

in your sentence

 

 

No more words for thee

expressions of your eyes to see

gonna tell the world all alone

this is the day of joy, not mourn!

silence in the dark just like in void

memories remain like sticking in tabloid!

 

 

You are precious with your versatile verses!it's fantastic!

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aleksandra wrote:

It is one of my favorite by me
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Aleks

 

My Favourite too and I like your poetry... Very nice!

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Aleksandra
aleksandra wrote:

 

....

... I saw myself

like a question

in your sentence

 

 

No more words for thee

expressions of your eyes to see

gonna tell the world all alone

this is the day of joy, not mourn!

silence in the dark just like in void

memories remain like sticking in tabloid!

 

 

You are precious with your versatile verses!it's fantastic!

 

Thank you Bloodyday for your lovely words and for this lovely poem too. I like your way of expressing the thoughts about what you read. You are living poetry. I like that way

 

Thanks for comment. Glad you like it.

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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Aleksandra
interesting to note "passed" the bridge not passed over

 

I really like this concise piece

-Jalfrezi

 

Thank you Jalfrezi. I don't know that note is it correct, but I felt like that and wrote icon_smile.gif I will check on it. And I love the concise pieces. I'm used to write like that, but on my own language, so yes this is translated poem by me. The origin is on Macedonian language.

 

Thank you

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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aleksandra wrote:

It is one of my favorite by me
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Aleks

 

My Favourite too and I like your poetry... Very nice!

thanks Summayya. I like your poetry too. Come on share something quickly icon_wink.gif

 

Neatly packaged like a pearl Aleks that I found, Frank.

Thanks Frank. I'm glad that you think like that. Thank you very much

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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alek this is much deeper and subtler than I epected for such a short poem. You have hidden the meaning of this in our own perception. Well done!

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Aleksandra

Thank you for your beautiful words fader. I am glad that after some time I hear your thoughts about my work. BW I always try to hide the meaning icon_smile.gif

 

Glad you are here my friend

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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