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The Beauty Of Nature


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Larsen M. Callirhoe

the beauty of nature

 

when i look to the stars i see my lovers eyes.

i go to the seashore and there is my beloved

bathing in the water.

i stir the water making passionate love with her.

we dance with the stars of heaven.

the sun shines on us after the moonlight is gone,

we toast with red wine are union,

we marry in white,

everyone says the marriage is a grand site.

white doves are released to the air

when we kiss and say i do to one another.

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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Aleksandra

Lovely expressed Victor. So emotional imageries and all expressions are full with feelings and sense.

 

This gives perfect love scene.

 

I loved this poem my friend

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

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goldenlangur

Hello Victor,

 

In the eyes of love every place is suffused with memories and indeed the presence of the loved one. You bring this out in some beautiful images. I quote a few of my favorite:

 

Larsen M. Callirhoe wrote:

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i stir the water making passionate love with her.

we dance with the stars of heaven.

the sun shines on us after the moonlight is gone,

 

 

How tender and moving!

 

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

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i believe this one is worth reading again. thanks for comments aleks and GL.

 

vic

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This poem seems to transcend from the imaginary, to reality, and back. This gives it an otherworldly feel. For some reason, these are the lines that transport me the most:

Larsen M. Callirhoe wrote:

 

when i look to the stars i see my lovers eyes.

i go to the seashore and there is my beloved

bathing in the water ....

 

everyone says the marriage is a grand site.

Very romantic. I can feel the longing throughout.

 

Tony

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Aleksandra

Larsen M. Callirhoe wrote:

 

bump

 

i believe this one is worth reading again. thanks for comments aleks and GL.

 

vic

 

Yes Vic you are right. This poem is so worth, and I loved.

And always is a pleasure to read and feel your romantic poetical voice.

 

Take care my friend

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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