dedalus Posted November 29, 2011 Share Posted November 29, 2011 I don't love you I don't. You just hang around like a piece of furniture. I am a singer. That's what she says. I am an artiste! Good-looking. Mmmm. She sings .... When my heart is bloo-hoo I think of you- hoo ... because our love it is so true -hoo. Deadly. She: Don't you dare touch me! He: Sweet girly-boo. Haha. Cough. And when the sunlight comes shi-hi-hining through -hoo, I will be they-hey-hair, dear, with la-la-hahve for yoo-hoo! Great song. Bound to be a hit. Cough. Shit. Sorry. From the top, ladies? When my hyart is bloo-ahoo ... She: I don't think you are a nice man. He: Oh but I am. Cough. Have another drink. Aya tinka yoo- hoo bekozzara luh-hoovvvv Cough, cough, hold on to me. Jesus, I'm sorry. It was gas in the War. She: Oh, my dear, are you all right? He: Hold on to me. Closer. I'm so sorry, forgive me! Izzzahaa -zo-zo -troo-hooo. Encore. Dear sweet forbearing girl, show me your thing, your little bobblies. O please, please pretty please? Show me all the hidden places of your body where sunlight shines not through. Cough, cough. I am dying, sweet girl, bear with me. I've never ever seen these things before. Yes, she says, I will do this for you, I will do it! I will do it! And then, she says, will you say you love me? I will say anything you like, my dear, I'll say anything you damn well please! Quote Drown your sorrows in drink, by all means, but the real sorrows can swim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted November 30, 2011 Share Posted November 30, 2011 A different slant to the demure, traditional "Banks of the sweet primroses" type of theme. Effective psychology (and Blarney). Ben. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted December 2, 2011 Share Posted December 2, 2011 Too much time on your hands Brendan? Your skill as a writer saves this piece. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted December 9, 2011 Share Posted December 9, 2011 always entertaining my poetry friend in arms. ya know what they say of course. war is hell! or is it give them bloody hell. or is that what the Englisch blokes say. i thought the yanks were the ones that came up with that saying. on a different note. i have a new girl friend. she is a keeper. i have expterienced dreams of meeting her. 10 years ago god sweet jesus i had dreams of meeting her. weird isn't it. i even got her name right. marina I wrote that weird love ballard for her. my-god she is so beautiful with her white platinum hair. victor michael Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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