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So soon it had started , So soon it has ended


jainrohit

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So soon it had started ; So soon it has ended

Thanks heavens ! life's perilous deceit has ended .

 

Man peeps back in his past ! frowns on his foot prints ;

Why repent now ?? life's long lonely street has ended .

 

Life is a possession granted by god ;

We surrender our rights , when permit has ended.

 

Vulgar and obscene the lyrics have become ;

The era of morals and merit has ended.

 

Shrewd banker is plotting new ways of fraud ;

Since the era of cheaper credit has ended.

 

Knowledge will remain clumped behind firewalls ;

For us the founder of Reddit has ended.

 

Vietnam - afghan - is Teheran the next ??

its long since the war in Tikrit has ended .

 

As life ! You too betrayed me ! My dear ghazal ;

Fulfilling your demands , your ''Rohit'' has ended

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Without looking at your "tags", I recognized the ghazal right away. This was a perfect choice of form for your thoughts!

 

Love this line:

 

The era of morals and merit has ended.

 

Kudos.

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