douglas Posted March 8, 2014 Share Posted March 8, 2014 Cold Lovethe waterthe watercool upon my facelike your cold handscaressing meleaving lingering finger tracesyour frozen love is so pureand cleancold passion that preserves my hearta freeze bringing togethershimmering pieces once pulled far apartfrom mist to waterfrom water to icethe frosts of your adorationdescend from the skiesleaving me as soft and sensuousas driven snowthis is the beautiful coldnessthat i love to know Quote To receive love, you have to give it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted March 10, 2014 Share Posted March 10, 2014 Personally, I even dislike PHOTOGRAPHS of snow, but you have -- somewhat, haha-- redeemed those vile white flakes with this: the frosts of your adorationdescend from the skies Really pretty. Not sure I have ever seen a metaphor quite like it.....Or allusion, but methinks it am a metaphor. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted April 14, 2014 Share Posted April 14, 2014 Agree with Marti. A novel use of the metaphor. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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