douglas Posted June 10, 2015 Share Posted June 10, 2015 The whisper broke the silence Filling the air With the sound of consciousness The warm steamy breath of love Flowing from a mouth Into an ear And the heat of uttered meanings Tender expressions And declarations Lapped upon the shores Of comprehension Causing tears and shivers of joy Skin against skin Warm and soft and vital Sensitivity enfolding awareness Fed by air and water And by love The whisper was the sound of god That had travelled through time Creating this moment And a billion others like it simultaneously Movement and energy Articulation and emotion Intangible treasures of a seen universe Enormity that can not be conceived Brilliance and profundity That overwhelms when Mere fragments of it are realised The experience of existence An abstraction beyond definition A holy state of being That is both scientific and supernatural The whisper is the sound of a life Divided into innumerable aspects Complex expressions of a sensitivity That runs beyond cosmic depths It is the voice of One Passionately attempting to understand Where it comes from An eternal memory That stretches further than light An essence so pure It reflects infinity Forming shining fragments That are limitless and gloriously resplendent. Quote To receive love, you have to give it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted June 24, 2015 Share Posted June 24, 2015 You are always so replete with extremes! A holy state of being That is both scientific and supernatural Much passion here. The sustained tension is finally released at the end, and the reader can breathe again! :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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