douglas Posted December 3, 2015 Share Posted December 3, 2015 He said that the eyes I drew Were expressive - I liked that He said that the way my hair hung Across my forehead reminded him Of Rupert Everett - I liked that too He said that he was glad that I’d phoned him - I also liked that But what I like And what I really desire Are not necessarily the same things Quote To receive love, you have to give it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poetjohncompton Posted December 3, 2015 Share Posted December 3, 2015 This is sad. I really enjoyed it. I liked the talk pattern of it! Quote https://www.facebook.com/poetjohncompton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted December 4, 2015 Share Posted December 4, 2015 Hi Douglas, Like MP, I thought the frame or manner in which you present each thought is very effective. There is a pleasing rhythm that concludes in an unfulfilled tone. Poignant. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frank E Gibbard Posted December 16, 2015 Share Posted December 16, 2015 great lay-out pattern there Douglas and evokes your youness sweetly. Frank Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bob Posted December 19, 2015 Share Posted December 19, 2015 This poem reflects mixed emotions. The mind is a complex, vital part of human anatomy. It is capable of interpreting different messages at the same time. The five sensory organs may well be sending complimentary thoughts, but the mind is independantly capable of desiring something totally different to appease it. TRUE LOVE is capable of channeling all senses jointly. YarnSpinner Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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