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Under The Stars


Larsen M. Callirhoe

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

Under The Stars

 

I hold you my love in my arms tightly

under the nighttime sky.

I wish for a shooting star

to make our dreams come true.

 

Many of the vast stars in the heaven above

twinkle on us this evening by the ocean shoreline.

We dance in the water as the tides

come crashing in and out to sea.

 

I make love to Elizabeth in the ocean

on South Beach Miami Florida.

Half naked female models watch us

have intercourse in the salty water

 

Neither of us mind the models

watching us make love in the ocean.

For now this is a dream but one day

it will become reality under the stars.

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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Aleksandra

icon_biggrin.png. Victor I love this poem. How romantic and passionate. It has very nice imageries. Even you gave more precise detail " on South Beach Miami Florida " and the imagery works more powerful. .The passion is at the top what gives nice feeling, and also I think gives a hope, like you say in the last lines: " For now this is a dream but one day it will become reality under the stars ". Definitely it's worth to wait icon_smile.gif

 

Much enjoyed with this poem. I love to read these poems of yours Vic. Sensitive, romantic, not so sad, like the other ones.

 

Wonderful

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

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I, too, liked the local reference, Victor, and how the models watched your activity, but you didn't mind. As always, I liked the shift from dream to reality.

 

Tony

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goldenlangur

Hi vic,

 

Always there's this immense longing in your poems and how vividly you capture the consummation of love. The night sky and the ocean and stars all reflect this rapturous celebration of passion.

 

 

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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