Tinker Posted October 29, 2017 Share Posted October 29, 2017 Cali Fire Storm Running, running, running race, fire in flicking, licking pace. Roar of winds are whirling loud, crack and boom of heated shroud. Giant trees engulfed in flame, grass and houses all the same, human life a pawn in the game. Rushing storm in smoky cloud, choking, burning eyes and skin. Treasures lost, devoured within moments. Time and life a spin. Running, running, running race Fire in flicking, licking pace. ~~Judi Van GorderA Boutonniere Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted November 6, 2017 Share Posted November 6, 2017 Tetrameter, an appropriate choice to set the pace. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dee2 Posted November 12, 2017 Share Posted November 12, 2017 I could almost hear the roar of the inferno, Tink. Nicely done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted November 12, 2017 Author Share Posted November 12, 2017 Thanks Tony and Dee. The form was appropriate for the subject. The aftermath a barren scarred void but at the time 70 mile an hour fire storm didn't leave any time to do anything but run. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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