JTParreira Posted May 20, 2009 Share Posted May 20, 2009 Men and fish waiting in small hills of the sea sweet hands will come as the low clouds dancing in the water and wind. by JTParreira Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted May 20, 2009 Share Posted May 20, 2009 Fascinating JT. A clear image- with a certain ironic twist--- Sweet-Hands on D-day? Powerful stuff, greatly enjoyed... DC Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 20, 2009 Share Posted May 20, 2009 I enjoyed this concise poem. Small hills/of the sea is a lovely image. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
douglas Posted May 20, 2009 Share Posted May 20, 2009 a beautiful poem with lovely images and textures. thank you! Quote To receive love, you have to give it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 20, 2009 Share Posted May 20, 2009 Wonderful expressions in this poem Joao. Imageries are perfect also. Thanks for sharing. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodyday Posted May 20, 2009 Share Posted May 20, 2009 is it a haiku? but imagery portrait is so strong! always recalling an ideal day to miss! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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