JoelJosol Posted December 31, 2020 Share Posted December 31, 2020 You used my pant's pocket as drop box slipping into it a note (a raffle entry to win your heart maybe?) signed with your name, I bet. It was New Year's Eve when I pulled it out in time for the fireworks lighting up my face, breaking out into a smile. Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to post Share on other sites
David W. Parsley Posted January 9 Share Posted January 9 Joel, I like the playful, flirty feel of this piece. It tantalizes me with missing details: where did this sleight-of-hand occur? Was there a look exchanged? Did you know at the time? What kind of light prefigured fireworks in the other's gaze? etc. - David Quote Link to post Share on other sites
JoelJosol Posted January 9 Author Share Posted January 9 Thanks, David. That is exactly the intent, for the reader to supply their own details for their own personal experience of the poem. Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to post Share on other sites
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