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Terry L shuff

                                                                                                     Love has been our guide,                                                                                                                                                                                               when we set forth, side by side.                                                                                                                                                                                             Through the passage of time,                                                                                                                                                                                        We faced the trials, that life contrived.                                                                                                                                                                              The journey of  life's joys and pains,                                                                                                                                                                                 The good memories, in our hearts remain.                                                                                                                                                                          Yet unknown, the future holds,                                                                                            51 years if Marriage.                                                                                           We'll face it, though were old.

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2 hours ago, Terry L shuff said:

Love has been our guide,
         when we set forth, side by side.
Through the passage of time,
         We faced the trials, that life contrived. 
The journey of  life's joys and pains,
          The good memories, in our hearts remain.
Yet unknown, the future holds, 
           51 years if Marriage. 
We'll face it, though were old.

or

Love has been our guide, 
when we set forth, side by side.
Through the passage of time,
We faced the trials, that life contrived.
The journey of  life's joys and pains,
The good memories, in our hearts remain.
51 years if Marriage.
We'll face it, though were old.

 I don't know what happened when you posted the poem but the format seems to have gone off a bit.  I'm wondering if either of these two formats were how you wanted it presented?  

I got you beat, I've been married 57 years, working on 58.  I too am old and feeling every minute of it, but life is still an adventure, just a little slower even though the time speeds by.  

Nice tribute to your marriage. 

~~Judi

~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com

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