Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 24, 2009 Share Posted May 24, 2009 Tonight under the stars. I will hold you tight. When we make love we will shout at the top of our lungs and sing to another about how much we love each other. When we make love we will sip wine and dance under the moon where the clouds whisper to us in the gentle breeze. In the quiet storm we here one another’s thoughts. When we make love our voices will echo on mountain tops and our hearts will be dedicated to one another. if we are quiet enough maybe we can hear angels speak to us in our subtle dreams and brush against our hearts. Tonight will be special I promise you this Elizabeth. When we dance under the stars where the moon glows and looks down on us. Maybe we will fall in love and drink wine until we our drunk. Because I really love you. I speaks these words to your soul. When we are young we will run on the beach naked and let the roaring waves crash down on us. When we make love we will touch and your heart will skip a beat and I will know you love me. When we touch The birds chirp to us as the sun rises in the East. Our love will fade into the echoes of the daylight. So now we fall asleep in one another’s arms naked as the oceans waves crash down on us. To bad all life couldn’t be as simple as this. For tonight I will dream about us quietly waiting until the day we meet. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pawn shop Posted May 24, 2009 Share Posted May 24, 2009 Very romantic. This is a poem that could of been written 500 years ago..... and has stayed relavent with each passing century... that's what I honestly like to think about this poem. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waxwings Posted May 24, 2009 Share Posted May 24, 2009 Lovely! What else can I, who would prefer to write nothing but love poems, say to this. I would change "another", in L5, to "each other", or not? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted June 10, 2009 Share Posted June 10, 2009 Romantic and a poem full of passion Vic. I enjoyed the sound of love here. Very sensitive. Alek. Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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