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Aleksandra

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goldenlangur
fresh paw prints

the barn door tightly shut

a disappointed bobcat

 

 

You give us something of the wildlife in your part of the globe, rumisong icon_smile.gif

 

 

disappointed bob cat

watches his mate cross

the traffic

 

 

 

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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goldenlangur
the traffic

bumper to bumper

in a snow-lit night

 

Good to see you around Lake icon_smile.gif

 

 

 

 

in a snow-lit night

people speak -

trails of smoke

 

 

 

 

 

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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goldenlangur
trails of smoke

lights flickering inside the tent

lovers abandoned boots

 

 

 

lovers abandoned boots

on the empty beach

dawn

 

 

 

 

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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goldenlangur
dawn

candle blown off -

he's gone

 

 

One can sense the pain here, Lake. My deep condolence.

 

 

he's gone

no foot prints

no shadow

 

 

 

 

 

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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goldenlangur
no shadow

under the sun, neither

in the darkness

 

 

in the darkness

sound of oars

a lone boat

 

 

 

 

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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goldenlangur
on the shore

rows of willows

bowing their heads

 

Lovely to have you back on the track, summayya icon_smile.gif

 

 

 

bowing their heads

the monkeys miss

glare of cameras

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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bowing their heads

the monkeys miss

glare of cameras

 

glare of cameras

brightened all eyes

even the blind

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goldenlangur
glare of cameras

brightened all eyes

even the blind

 

even the blind

track the sun as it moves

behind the cloud

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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even the blind

track the sun as it moves

behind the cloud

 

behind the cloud

geese dream of arriving home

spring's eternal warmth

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goldenlangur
behind the cloud

geese dream of arriving home

spring's eternal warmth

 

spring's eternal warmth

how distant it seems

this January night

 

 

 

 

 

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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by my feet

the sea waves pile

their silent lives in shells.

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by my feet

the sea waves pile

their silent lives in shells.

 

 

their silent lives in shells

like the moon sings

every night!

 

 

RoNY forgets tears!

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Aleksandra
their silent lives in shells

like the moon sings

every night!

 

 

RoNY forgets tears!

 

every night

like every morning

rain and tears.

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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every night

like every morning

rain and tears.

 

rain and tears

dried so soon

drought begins

 

 

Only RoNy !

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where's an end?

as if it could matter to kitten and

his ball of yarn

 

His ball of yarn

Watching his soul flying to the sky

Reply of thirst and mourn!

 

RoNY watching shy!

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Reply of thirst and mourn!

a silent day,

a thousand dark nights

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a thousand dark nights

illuminated by

a thousand candles

 

 

~~Tink

 

a thousand candles

float on the moonlit river

heaven on earth

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Aleksandra
heaven on earth,

life on moon-

an illusion

 

Summayya, nice to see you around, working icon_wink.gif.

I like your haiku.

 

an illusion

- bright morning.

damn dream

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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Thanks Alek. By the way I like yours better icon_biggrin.png.

 

damn dream

happiness-

footprints on shore.

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Aleksandra
damn dream

happiness-

footprints on shore.

 

 

How nice you are icon_smile.gif - Thank you.

 

footprints on shore

landmarks my way -

to the hades

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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Larsen M. Callirhoe
damn dream

happiness-

footprints on shore.

 

 

How nice you are icon_smile.gif - Thank you.

 

footprints on shore

landmarks my way -

to the hades

 

to the hade

do we really get damned

i don't think so

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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i don't think so

follow me now

just make a road to what we believe in

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with tolerance and hope

meet me on the other side

is this you really want?

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

is this really what you want?

you better believe it.

I want the suns rays on me.

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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Larsen M. Callirhoe said:
is this really what you want?
you better believe it.
I want the suns rays on me.

I want the sun's rays on me
warming my skin
lighting my way
                     ~~ jvg

~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com

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summayya said:
lighting my way
are my opposites,
I am reborn.

Wow summayya, this was an interesting twist.... something to meditate on. How are you? In the US yet?

~~tink

I am reborn
new skin, new ideas, new heart
with an extra beat
                  ~~jvg

~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com

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lighting my way

are my opposites,

I am reborn.

 

Wow summayya, this was an interesting twist.... something to meditate on. How are you? In the US yet?

 

~~tink

 

I am reborn

new skin, new ideas, new heart

with an extra beat

 

Glad you liked the Haiku.. it made me think too (though I have usually tried my best not to step into those seas icon_lol.gif)

 

I am fine and in Pakistan icon_smile.gif

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