Gatekeeper Posted May 6, 2013 Share Posted May 6, 2013 You won't weep for me as I would not hear your cries Bury not the dead It's part of you that has passed You bury yourself instead 'keeper 050613 / 1000 Quote from the black desert Link to post Share on other sites
Tinker Posted May 6, 2013 Share Posted May 6, 2013 Wow Gatekeeper, How true this is. Beautifully written. I'm thinking you have at least another 1000 tankas to share, can't wait to read them. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to post Share on other sites
moonqueen Posted May 6, 2013 Share Posted May 6, 2013 Excellent. The love does not end. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
dcmarti1 Posted May 6, 2013 Share Posted May 6, 2013 Striking ending. In our face.....in a good way. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Benjamin Posted May 15, 2013 Share Posted May 15, 2013 An eloquent take on the controversial saying that "funerals are for the living not the dead." Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Gatekeeper Posted May 20, 2013 Author Share Posted May 20, 2013 Thanks for the kind words. Not likely I'll ever get the haikus, senryus or tankas ever counted. I would rather write new ones. Quote from the black desert Link to post Share on other sites
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