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Should have spent more time

cradling dark poetry

Could have slept with it

 

You might get a sense of her's

the black scarf around her neck

from the black desert

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That is lovely. Perfect image- Ms. Plath I assume (?) matters not, the her is universal. Lovedit!

 

J

thegateless.org Come on over and check out my poetry substack y'all;-) Or if your bored, head to the Zazzle store: https://www.zazzle.com/store/gateless. If you buy anything I lose a bet, so consider that before you violate the digital rules.

 

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I only know what I like. And I do like this. The image, very clear, strong. I am a fan of dark poetry and write more of that than of any other. Nice job on this one.

 

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Gatekeeper

Thanks for the comments.

Wasn't thinking of Sylvia, though I can see that.

Her name was Helen.

from the black desert

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Very, very nice, Gatekeeper. I'm hopelessly behind with comments -- managing the site itself has been taking up a lot of my time -- but be sure that I'm always reading and enjoying your submissions.

 

Tony

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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