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4/24/20 Self Portrait: The Fixer
Con/Jur/d 

I don’t like the sound
of my own voice 
he sd

If you
silently holdspace 
patiently cupping
themoment the
secondbetween bud 
and bloom
you’ll like it better
coming out of 
someone 
else's 

mouth
like this
I sd.

 

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This technique is interesting.  At first my brain read it wrong.  thermometer ???  virus on the brain . . .I read it that way twice before the Ah ha moment kicked in.   "the moment" without space is quite different.  Experimental, meaningful.... I like it.

~~Tink

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