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After Image and Other 2 Word Visions
Con/Jur/d 4/17/2021

Old growth,
shagged bark,
occupied hollow,
feral hedge,
explodes yellow,
entwines green,
accents white.

Shadows boil,
leaves flail.
Shriek & squeak,
branch shudders,
quiet thumping.

Smell rain,
taste iron,
feel clouds,
breath shortens.

Something moves!

Hurry home,
after scene.


 

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tonyv

Nice one, Juris. I think where it hits me hard is here:

On 4/17/2021 at 5:14 PM, dr_con said:

... Smell rain,
taste iron,
feel clouds,
breath shortens.

Something moves!

Hurry home,
after scene.

Hurry home -- and I love how the title comes full circle from "After Image" to "after scene."

Tony

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