Tinker Posted April 25, 2021 Share Posted April 25, 2021 Way behind got some catching up to do. I know impossible, but anything I can write even this bad is a gift to me. Killing two birds, a new form which I found the rhythm awkward. Appetite One dishfried fishMade portion smallWon't eat allHit a wallComplains of noxious smellHe's never eaten wellNo more dinner bellI'll try some gelA new era has arrivedHis appetite took a dive Ensure is keeping him alivefor now he is revivedand thankfully he will survive ~~jvg A Ziggurat Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted April 25, 2021 Share Posted April 25, 2021 I can see why it feels awkward. But Found it fun. Nice work Judi, and no worries. I've found this NaPo to be valuable while extremely, at times frustrating, but I'm doing it and I hope the value ultimately outweighs the frustration;-) J 1 Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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