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Moonless Reflection

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Moonless Reflection

 

In the black and empty night

I walk with my last memory of you,

Moonless walk

--------- mirrors regret

-----Too late to say thank you

--------- to tell you I forgive you

--------- to ask for forgiveness

--------- to bless your journey

--------- to tell you I love you

Moonless talk

--------- mirrors regret.

-------I could only say

------------"goodbye". . . .

-- -------------- ~~Judi Van Gorder

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Oh, WOW! I am nuts about this one. I've read it over and over and it nearly makes me cry, each time. I love the way the "Moonless walk", "Moonless talk" and "regret" 'mirror' themselves and each other.

 

Regrets...I imagine we all live with them.

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Agree. I like the mirroring.

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Thanks Tammi, It sometimes makes me want to cry when I read it but I'm a little closer to the subject. Thanks for reading it.

 

 

Hi Marti, I was playing with words trying to create an almost chant like effect. Thanks for commenting.

 

~~Tink

 

 

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It is much like a 'visual echo', Judi, and I love it.

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