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badger11

Today

all day delay.

Tonight

you say

to play.

No need to feed with haste,

relax

with time to taste.

Deny,

refine with spice,

and all your dreams

define

with simple sleep

to secret heat

so deep.

 

 

 

I close

your eyes with care,

comb your hair so fine,

so fair.

I kiss

your lips

to please,

today

to tease

with ease

your curves

so gentle

so sweet.

 

 

 

I draw the blinds –

and sip

your wine

and find

you smiling there -

nice

and tight -

in something white

- and you

comb my hair

-and close

my lips

-and seed

my dreams -

for enough delay

today

you say,

now is the time

to play.

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tonyv

Lyrical, sensual, dreamy -- the form complements the content perfectly, Badge. Thanks for sharing the poem.

 

Tony


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badger11
Lyrical, sensual, dreamy -- the form complements the content perfectly, Badge. Thanks for sharing the poem.

 

Tony

 

Pleased it pleased, a pleasure in sharing :0)

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Lake

It's lively, it plays in a quick rhythm, almost like dancing. And yes, sensual which always apprears in your poems. I was not quite sure of "Deny", though. That maybe due to my holiday fatique.

 

Thanks for the light, relaxing write.

 

Lake

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dr_con

Badge,

 

A delight! Sensual yes- but the essence of it- These lines:

 

No need to feed with haste,

relax

with time to taste.

Deny,

refine with spice,

 

really make clear the border between the sensuous and the simple needful.

 

Well, well done!

 

DC&J


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badger11

Thank you Dr C. and Lake. Pleased you enjoyed this attempt at some light entertainment.

 

Best wishes for the festive period to you both.

 

badge :0)

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waxwings

The words speak for themselves. My praises would pale before that.

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Aleksandra

Ah badge, I agree that this poem is sensual and lyrical. The rhythm is works so well. Deep and soft poem. Thank you sharing this poem.

 

ALeksandra


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badger11
Ah badge, I agree that this poem is sensual and lyrical. The rhythm is works so well. Deep and soft poem. Thank you sharing this poem.

 

ALeksandra

 

Thanks Aleks. This is my 'naughty' side.

 

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