Very nice work, Phil. I enjoyed the mood of the piece also its clean, polished layout on the page of what appears be a tasteful, elegant publication. The poem has an ultra-finished look, especially with the choices in first and last words -- hullabaloo/peek-a-boo -- whether that was an intentional consequence or not. The title is perfect.

Tony

Apologies Tony. I thought I had responded. Thank you for your comments, and yes the structure was intentional, pleased you enjoyed.

all the best

Phil