I downloaded and saved the PDF file. I like your entry. It says a lot in just two lines. I especially like how the title flows naturally into the poem.

Tony

Congratulations Badge.   I like that we can now comment on a member's published work.  So much is packed into these 2 short lines with the integrated title, in effect creating a 3 line poem.  The structure is a modern day Doublet without rhyme.  Nice.
~~Tink

Thank you both. The mag. is not to everyone's taste, but I find it experimental and accessible.