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----------Love Poem

 

---------------My heart flies

-------on light winds

towards you.

 

--Over me,

the ever-alive forest

----------sways its branches

-----------------in

e c s t a s y.

 

I have been in a real bad writer's block so excuse the rustiness. I would like to thank tony for the help. A Big thank you Tony!

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Gothic.......sounds more like a love spell has been cast and is seeking out it's victim icon_smile.gif

 

Tony gets all the credit around here....what dah icon_scratch.png

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----------Love Poem

 

---------------My heart flies

-------on light winds

towards you.

 

--Over me,

the ever-alive forest

----------sways its branches

-----------------in

e c s t a s y.

Hey Summ, it's nice to see you getting your muse back. This is a lovely poem, but unfortunately I can't take any of the credit; the words are all yours. I do think it's a great title, though. Hmmm ... I wonder why??? icon_lol.gif

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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Tony gets all the credit around here....what dah icon_scratch.png

 

Hey Jonathan ... you only get what you give! icon_lol.gif Lend a hand, and people will thank you all day long!

 

Okay, as those Bartles & James guys used to say in that wine cooler commercial: Thank you for your support!

 

Tony icon_lol.gif

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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Aleksandra

Summayya this poem sounds wonderful. Especially I loved how this one starts

 

summayya wrote:

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Love Poem

 

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My heart flies

-------
on light winds

towards you.

 

And then the describing with natural symbols, what is wonderful choice for this poem.

I am glad that Tony helped you with your writer's block. He knows how to do that a lot. I am happy that we share Tony here and his knowledges.

 

And don't be jealous Jonathan icon_biggrin.png this is just poetry icon_razz.gif

 

Summ I loved this poem and this one have the best title.

 

Thank you for sharing. I wait for more.

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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goldenlangur

Hi summayya,

 

 

Lovely, delicate imageries mark your return to writing! How wonderful!

 

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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Frank E Gibbard

Sort of segways down the page to ocupy more space and fill out the imagery Summayya. Effective, girl. Frank

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