Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted June 19, 2009 Share Posted June 19, 2009 Winter Has Come Early I would never know, what brought me down and struck me hard on a warm Summer‘s afternoon. A cold darkness has filled the world of my life. A void has entered my heart by the sea side where I used to roam and my thoughts use to soar like the clouds that fill the horizon sky. A moment frozen in time so I could catch my breath. My heart would beat waiting for the begotten SON. Who will revisit us soon as a beacon to guide this world called Gaia to paradise. Destiny leads us all. Holy Spirit take my hand and guide me thru the turmoil of this deceived, deaf, and blind world. Yet, I believe the LIGHT Jesus Christ of the world will come back. Though I dreamed of your return many seasons ago I would have to wait for you to heal me on some future date. We sailed on the ocean together and we walked on the water together. Then I drifted away when the stormy weather came and the lofty winds separated us. I would journey many dark nights and lightless filled days without you by my side. Every moment we tried to understand my soul-mate and I. Our hearts and minds touch the flames of hell’s fire. That would torment our souls without the redeemer to save us from the heavy rains that filled the seas of the world. Was it just me crying in my bed. It is like I hardly had to steer. It seems as if it all was designed. It is love that keeps us going. It is the weather that changes. Though the seasons appear to be different. It is my pain, that emerges an feels the same. It is all part of the plan. A man would be born into this world without a mark unblemished. He would die without a sin and he would rise a King. Oh why did we Lord and Savior exist when this world was young. I would wonder how it all began. Though the days would be long and cold you would be crucified for me and my companion on a chilly spring day. Where the sun shined very little light that day. Hope for me burns eternal. My faith still remains even though it was tested in a raging fire. We walked this path together Elizabeth. I was a hooded man who preached of your second coming Lord Jesus. Destiny take me by the hand. Though many doubt, all they have to do is read the passages in the scripture of the holy bible that said he wore thorns on his head for our pride and he was pierced for our egos. As his water and blood poured out of his side. On a bitter gloomy day you would return to this world and fill all mysteries with light Like it was in the beginning. You would unite me with my lover. It was all pieces of the puzzle. Just remember God has a arrangement for us all. We traveled this journey together Ever since this world began Even though you where far from us You in truth were always next to us in spirit.. We really never know and still we try to understand and comprehend. A man would die on a cross and rise through the torment of the rising flames to save you and me. We would never doubt. Though some would not believe. Elizabeth, you and I we would have faith in each other. The Lord who was resurrected for us all. So our hearts could unite in a future world. Do we wait for this world to be refined or are we swept away so we can love again and see the sun set after a long two-thousand years. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pawn shop Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 Epic stuff. Vast. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 In some ways different from your usual work, Victor. This one's highly lyrical. I especially like the beginning: I would never know, what brought me down and struck me hard on a warm Summer‘s afternoon. A cold darkness has filled the world of my life. A void has entered my heart by the sea side where I used to roam and my thoughts use to soar like the clouds that fill the horizon sky. Great title, too. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted June 30, 2009 Author Share Posted June 30, 2009 thanks jonathan and tony. this poem took quite a bit of thought to compose. some was more lyrical and didnt fit in when read aloud so i did change allot in this. glad for the read guys. victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 Larsen, Epic indeed, an inspired love poem- filled with faith. Reminds a bit of some of the Sufi poetry which implores and invokes the beloved God. A good read. Dr. Con Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted July 7, 2009 Author Share Posted July 7, 2009 Dr. Con i was surprised by your remarks because of your conceptions perceived of spirituality so thats for the comments. much thanks, sufi that was part of my intentions to relate with other religious poets in musings and deep invoke thoughts. i wrote this with rumi in the back of my mind. but to say it is remenicient of the sufi was something i didnt see lol. so thanks. larsen aka victor michael Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pawn shop Posted July 7, 2009 Share Posted July 7, 2009 "It seems it was all designed".......a nice line, indeed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted July 12, 2009 Share Posted July 12, 2009 I don't have words Vic, after this amazing poem. Different from you and very beautiful. I loved this poem, the tittle - all of it. The poem has a spirit. For sure, I will read this poem again and again. Good to read you again Victor - makes me happy Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted July 14, 2009 Author Share Posted July 14, 2009 thanks aleks and pawn shop. glad you enjoyed. vic Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted July 14, 2009 Share Posted July 14, 2009 Hi victor, Through despair to hope for a new beginning, the poet's life is suffused with an unshakable faith i the Saviour's return. This is very moving: Though the seasons appear to be different. It is my pain, that emerges an feels the same. Thank you. It's good to read your work after a long while. :) goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted July 20, 2009 Author Share Posted July 20, 2009 hi goldenlangur, i seem to have a passion for spirit-filled poetry. thanks for reading and commenting. that goes for everyone. victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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