dr_con Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 Pigeons Bliss is but a thought away. The trick is to remove the thought- Clark Heinrich In front of the porn Theater the homeless witch spreads her magic, breadcrumbs call her street friends out of Sky False Illumination, of necessity is the same thing as True or as the Buddhists say Form is Emptiness and emptiness form Is it true that when I feel this way, Sentience does too? Charlie's young brother moves sideways through the linear crowds smoking and grinning madly Red Mohawked musician holds his guitar casually, carefully A Mother, shoulders slumped front facing baby in tow, grateful for this burden. A strong wind blows Pigeons descend, nodding their heads as if to say, emphatically, "Yes." Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 Somehow gritty, somehow sublime, Dr. C: ... the homeless witch spreads her magic, breadcrumbs call her street friends out of Sky ... ... A strong wind blows Pigeons descend, nodding their heads as if to say, emphatically, 'Yes.' I always liked pigeons. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted July 7, 2009 Author Share Posted July 7, 2009 Thanks Tony! seems to have fallen between the loops- just as the thought itself did;-) DC Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frank E Gibbard Posted July 7, 2009 Share Posted July 7, 2009 A rumination which says more tween lines in the DC manner. Liked the locale the scene and the philosiphising and the reader (pigeon) or t'other way round cocks a quizzical head. Frank Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted July 9, 2009 Share Posted July 9, 2009 Hi DC, For some reason this took me back to when I was in college, (1960) I went to San Francisco State but lived on the other side of the bay in El Cerrito. I used to take the muni but on the way home I often got off early and walked the last mile or two to the bus station to take me across the bay. I loved the walk, sometimes I would stop for a coffee and just people watch. Your "homeless witch" reminded me of a woman I used to see regularly, she once sat next to me at a coffee bar that was open to the street and ordered a half cup of coffee. I remember her filling the cup with cream. .... I paid for her cup of coffee. She didn't say a word to me, just drank her coffee and went on her way. Probably the first homeless person I ever encountered and she left an impression on me but I hadn't thought about her in years until reading your poem. Thank you. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted July 11, 2009 Share Posted July 11, 2009 Hi Dr Con, Love the way you extend a moment of this encounter in the thoughts that come to you: the Buddhists sayForm is Emptiness and emptiness form Is it true that when I feel this way, Sentience does too? In quotidian terms the form of someone like the street dweller is ever filled with want because it is empty of the samsaric aspirations and paraphernalia. In a way the Buddhist sunyata or inherent emptiness of existence for someone like the homeless is a paradox. Even if i got your intent wrong, I enjoyed reading this. Thank you. goldenlangur PigeonsBliss is but a thought away. The trick is to remove the thought- Clark Heinrich In front of the porn Theater the homeless witch spreads her magic, breadcrumbs call her street friends out of Sky False Illumination, of necessity is the same thing as True or as Charlie's young brother moves sideways through the linear crowds smoking and grinning madly Red Mohawked musician holds his guitar casually, carefully A Mother, shoulders slumped front facing baby in tow, grateful for this burden. A strong wind blows Pigeons descend, nodding their heads as if to say, emphatically, "Yes." Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted July 12, 2009 Author Share Posted July 12, 2009 Thanks GL for dropping by and adding your keen insight! ;-) DC Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted July 12, 2009 Author Share Posted July 12, 2009 And to Tinker and Frank as well- just finding my way in the new virtual city of PMO ;-) DC Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rhymeguy Posted July 12, 2009 Share Posted July 12, 2009 (edited) A moment captured and defined. One can experience the thoughts and actions of each character. Very nice snapshot. I see it in black and white except for the mohawked hair-it seems the only color as if that alone defines the scene. rg Edited July 12, 2009 by rhymeguy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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