Frank E Gibbard Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 The leaf leaves the tree A body falls to ground All a matter of gravity Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 I am constantly impressed that I write a poem on a theme (Gravity) and then another poet spontaneously and better than myself writes a poem :icon_sunny: :icon_sunny: :icon_sunny: Well done Frank! DC Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 Wow Frank, This must be the day for small poems and this is another good one. Your images are spot on, your logic irrefutable. Nice! ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 Wonderful poem Frank. I am the lover of short wisdoms :). I love it. The leaf leaves the treeA body falls to ground All a matter of gravity It is matter of gravity, both situations expressed here are by nature and gravity also. Thanks for sharing Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 Is this a haiku? Seems like a haiku to me. :) Well done, Frank. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 Hi Frank, Death and gravity are the universal laws that govern both nature and humans. Yet we imbue such experiences with an emotional significance and meaning is the sense I get from this pity verse. Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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