Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted August 30, 2009 Posted August 30, 2009 we talk, we walk without each other's reason. We dream, we laugh side by side. Adventures we do share in life. The day I met you my heart was filled with joy. We run in circles trying to please one another. I lived in a zoo till the day we met. We can survive this world together. Our eyes met and sparks flew. Will I be the warrior you picture me as. Sitting at the walls of heartache I met you in my dreams one day. We smiled without any style. It is so hard to please you. You didn't care as long as I was beside you. We dance, we laugh the day we got married. All our dreams did seem attainable. Who would of figured it would all end in a car accident. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe
tonyv Posted August 30, 2009 Posted August 30, 2009 I like the title, Victor. :) And I especially like these parts: We talk, we walk without each other's reason.We dream, we laugh side by side. Adventures we do share in life ... We run in circles trying to please one another. I lived in a zoo till the day we met ... All our dreams did seem attainable. Who would of figured it would all end in a car accident. I also like the poem's nostalgia, and how it ends with an ironic "Who would've thunk?" Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted August 31, 2009 Author Posted August 31, 2009 hi tony im gigling and laughing at what i am about to write. i was gonna name it "mister and mistress callirhoe" lol. than i thought of what i did at who do i direct this toward but let the reader decide if i m a mister and she is a mistress. im laughin hard writing this. in all seriousness thanks for commenting tony, victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe
goldenlangur Posted September 2, 2009 Posted September 2, 2009 Hi victor, What sweet memories of a special love and time shared and how poignantly brief it was. You bring out the sadness of this asundering of relationship but the note of celebration of what it was balances this and gives the poem a sweet-bitterness: We run in circlestrying to please one another. I lived in a zoo till the day we met. Sitting at the walls of heartache I met you in my dreams one day. We smiled without any style. .... All our dreams did seem attainable. Who would of figured it would all end in a car accident. Very moving. Thank you. Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.
Aleksandra Posted September 14, 2009 Posted September 14, 2009 Victor you are so nice :). You know how to brink something positive between sad poem, and it's wonderful how you keep your spirit up. The poem is well written and yes let the reader to decide that what is not so hard to realize in this case :). I like it how you wrote this poem. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia
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