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Run rabbit run, gotta hide

this ain’t no time for shame

ain’t no time for blame

inside outside, all the same

fucker he come on

he cocaine-eyed


broken stride, zigzag lines

braakk, braakk .. yah, ya missed!

nearly pissed ma Calvin Kleins


BOOM : windows explode

ratchet it up, a speedier mode

you know when you don’t got one

someone else has got a shotgun


Shee-it, that was close!

I think about designer clothes

done left them in ma room


now I be freakin

streakin down the street

the tarmac never touch ma feet

even as I go jinkin, I be thinkin

how the fuck’d he get an H&K?

top-of-the-line, friend of mine


you can’t just buy them off the shelf

so when tempers cool, become OK

I'd welcome a chat about that


kinda like to get one for myself

Edited by dedalus

Drown your sorrows in drink, by all means, but the real sorrows can swim

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Yes, yes indeed- marvelous flow, humorous and speedy and I really enjoyed the thematic structures as title- very PoMo and yet very real and now...


Well, well played...


Many Thanks!



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