dedalus Posted October 9, 2009 Share Posted October 9, 2009 (edited) Run rabbit run, gotta hide this ain’t no time for shame ain’t no time for blame inside outside, all the same fucker he come on he cocaine-eyed broken stride, zigzag lines braakk, braakk .. yah, ya missed! nearly pissed ma Calvin Kleins BOOM : windows explode ratchet it up, a speedier mode you know when you don’t got one someone else has got a shotgun Shee-it, that was close! I think about designer clothes done left them in ma room now I be freakin streakin down the street the tarmac never touch ma feet even as I go jinkin, I be thinkin how the fuck’d he get an H&K? top-of-the-line, friend of mine you can’t just buy them off the shelf so when tempers cool, become OK I'd welcome a chat about that kinda like to get one for myself Edited October 9, 2009 by dedalus Quote Drown your sorrows in drink, by all means, but the real sorrows can swim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted October 9, 2009 Share Posted October 9, 2009 Ded, Yes, yes indeed- marvelous flow, humorous and speedy and I really enjoyed the thematic structures as title- very PoMo and yet very real and now... Well, well played... Many Thanks! DC Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted October 11, 2009 Share Posted October 11, 2009 Reads and feels like a fast-paced rap song. Gangsta rap ... Word! And I don't mean Microsoft. :icon_eek: Tony :) Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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