douglas Posted November 13, 2009 Share Posted November 13, 2009 the spirits are about right now it's that perfect time the bridge between night and day between the mortal and eternal all is luminous yet fading electric blue and indigo everywhere there are ghosts flying around they swish towards me with speed the ghosts of those i have loved in the past i detect their faces against the sky as they are temporarily released from their eternal places i am the one who remains caged down here in time unable to see it all as it truly is caught within this beautiful trap both reluctantly and willfully as each moment passes i feel the wisdom of the ending it calls out to me peacefully. Quote To receive love, you have to give it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted November 14, 2009 Share Posted November 14, 2009 Hi Douglas, Images and thoughts arising as one goes through phases of meditation. I think you captured the essence of such a moment in your images of the liminal: the bridge between night and daybetween the mortal and eternal This is beautiful!: as each moment passes i feel the wisdom of the ending Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted November 16, 2009 Share Posted November 16, 2009 it's that perfect timethe bridge between night and day between the mortal and eternal all is luminous yet fading electric blue and indigo everywhere I, too, love twilight time. Beautifully expressed, Douglas. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted November 30, 2009 Share Posted November 30, 2009 Douglas, I like the way how you write. So many good images, and beautifully expressed. The poem is clear and very acceptable. Enjoyable read. I love it. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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