Lake Posted December 10, 2009 Share Posted December 10, 2009 Lighting a Stick of Incense Now he lies a continent away from here, in his usual T-shirt and jeans. He prefers nymphs to bibles, so no priests present. His computer must be at rest, too for we haven't received any emails nor seen his name flashing since then. What could I do to a caring poet's death? Once, he wrote to me, Just remember never to underestimate yourself, it can sometimes prove to be just as detrimental as overestimation. If you're unsure of anything, just ask. I was too late to ask while he was awake. Today, I light this thin stick of incense for this poet's broad heart on his 101st birthday. . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted December 12, 2009 Share Posted December 12, 2009 What a heartfelt elegy/remembrance poem, Lake. From the intriguing start, which makes the reader wonder who this person is and where he is, to the manner of reflection in the middle verse, to the commemorative act in the last, I think this one is perfect. I love how you say, I was too late to ask/while he was awake. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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