dedalus Posted December 24, 2009 Share Posted December 24, 2009 Streamalingaling Polly Fawcett Folly Faucet gnashes operatic teeth and makes us think of mashed potatoes and spam and nylons and wine bottles all along the tables all along the floor and the gramophone sings Vera Lynn drifting, lingering among the lovely crinkly smiles of wartime, dark eyes under bruises shiny skin grafts missing limbs the desperate gaiety of troubled young women. Quote Drown your sorrows in drink, by all means, but the real sorrows can swim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waxwings Posted December 28, 2009 Share Posted December 28, 2009 Good sounding stuff, papa. But why the double spacing. All it does is make it harder to read/grasp due to scrolling. waxwings, a.k.a. ikaros Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted December 28, 2009 Share Posted December 28, 2009 Excellent work, Brendan. As usual, your work transports me to another time and place. In this one, I enjoyed the captured moment(s), the thoughts that must have filled the minds of those immersed in the events of that fateful day. I like the short line construction and the layout. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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