goldenlangur Posted January 13, 2010 Share Posted January 13, 2010 dusk walk - two black figures on the bridge are old posts what else have I mistaken in the year just closed Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted January 14, 2010 Share Posted January 14, 2010 Brilliant! an excellent and profound observational piece. Absolutely loved it! DC&J Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted January 14, 2010 Share Posted January 14, 2010 I like how the poem looks to the past -- dusk walk - two black figures on the bridge are old posts what else have I mistaken in the year just closed -- yet seems to conclude it should "be forgot and never brought to mind." Super occasional tanka! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted January 16, 2010 Share Posted January 16, 2010 dusk walk - two black figures on the bridge are old posts what else have I mistaken in the year just closed I could read regret, remorse, an overwhelming realisation of failure and doubt; instead I've taken the moment as an honest one, lessons learnt from experience, and with this knowledge I would hope not to repeat the same errors. badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted January 26, 2010 Share Posted January 26, 2010 Absolutely beautiful, goldenlangur. But I don't even expect ever to see not so good tanka from you :). As I mentioned earlier, you are one of the best tanka writers. Much enjoyed. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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