dr_con Posted February 4, 2010 Posted February 4, 2010 (edited) A Thousand Words for Rain: For Gwyllm In our dreams it still just rains he says but when I lay embraced by the end the ancestors whisper nimbus regen lietus nelis yu Voices pouring through the paper sheet of our lives the impact of single drops a wedding a funeral a divorce a birth blur the text it becomes harder to read the pictograms to be complacent and clear of the assumed understanding the ideogram loses its context becomes a Rorschach transcending language pretending to be a soul an illusive myth dying in the storm holes punched through a precious thought a poem a love letter a contract a summons the self is tattered and pulped back to the wisdom of trees standing before the onslaught for years and for moments not thinking what is that word or the next nine-hundred-and-ninty-nine but I bend and I stand and I provide shelter and someday I will break and start the whole process again and again a constellation of learned values and shared assumption dotting the infinite Mystery of a face turned up and pointing Wet and not knowing it Dry and not caring Absolute and yet vague without naming or labeling the infinite suchness of this very process shakes our cosmos before it even began a search for these two-hundred- and-twenty-three words for rain. http://www.earthrites.org/turfing/ Edited February 4, 2010 by dr_con Quote thegateless.org
dedalus Posted February 6, 2010 Posted February 6, 2010 A good promise, DC; see that you keep it! Quote Drown your sorrows in drink, by all means, but the real sorrows can swim
tonyv Posted February 6, 2010 Posted February 6, 2010 Wisdom and self-realization sprinkle like rain in this intense work. The tree metaphor is superb: the self is tattered and pulped back to the wisdomof trees standing before the onslaught for years and for moments not thinking what is that word or the next nine-hundred-and-ninty-nine but I bend and I stand and I provide shelter and someday I will break and start the whole process again and again And just like sporadic occurrences of rain, life's milestones -- a wedding a funeral a divorce a birth ... a precious thought a poem a love letter a contract a summons ... -- are static throughout the ages. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
dr_con Posted February 10, 2010 Author Posted February 10, 2010 Thanks Tony and Ded! Promise? Hmmm, maybe and like so many of my transpersonal oaths I will endeavor to fulfill it despite never having seen the form or function;-) Hopefully will have this for two voices posted on the reading section soon... Much appreciation Guys! DC&J Quote thegateless.org
goldenlangur Posted February 12, 2010 Posted February 12, 2010 Hi Dr. Con, A pervading sense of going back to the beginning - searching in this haunting write. I too love the metaphor of the tree and how you show the way it is intertwined with all human endeavors - successful, fitful or yet to achieve: ... thought a poem a love letter a contract a summonsthe self is tattered and pulped back to the wisdom of trees standing before the onslaught for years and for moments not thinking what is that word or the next nine-hundred-and-ninty-nine ... Thank you. Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.
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