Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 whispering hearts sing freely as the birds do. crying in the night only lovers and fools will ever know. singing in the day let the light shine in your heart soever freely. whispering words of passion only bleeding hearts fulishly explore. tonight i celebrate our love with you together we share the sunrise and sunset. when we touch the choices that we make our minds only dare to go. so i write a memory about you in tribute to all the times we have cherished together. where does it ever stop the bleeding of the heart or the crying in the night. so much in words i tell you i love you in a song. we fly high like the eagles dare and the angels flap there wings. and there we return to the light up above where love is waiting. so it goes the song has been sung now it is time to say goodnight until another day to spend in the passing moving wind. cherished hearts will meet again. there will be no more crying to remember all the ashes we have made. just sparks of our memories will remind us so much of who we were and who we have been. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted February 13, 2010 Share Posted February 13, 2010 I think the parts which touch me the most are: so much in wordsi tell you i love you in a song ... and: just sparks of our memorieswill remind us so much of who we were and who we have been. Like a song, victor ... Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted February 14, 2010 Share Posted February 14, 2010 Hello victor, Good to see you posting again :icon_sunny: I find this quite beautifully filled with ache: crying in the night only lovers and fools will ever know. Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted February 15, 2010 Share Posted February 15, 2010 Victor, this is nice, soft and romantic. I love your emotional poems, they sound so innocent, so clean and sincere. This one is wonderful. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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