Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted July 11, 2010 Posted July 11, 2010 A Flame, A Spark, A Fire Burning Somewhere our destinies were meant to be Somewhere in time our hearts were meant to collide Somewhere in this world our souls will unite Someday I will walk hand in hand with you Some were meant to sing the blues Summer nights in the heat we make love Imagine a night together, oh what a thrill Don't stop believing for we will be together This I promise you as the Sun is my witness A flame, a spark starts this fire within us Time sets us free to be The desire is overwhelming I don't know where I will be tomorrow So please stay with me now So tomorrow doesn't come our way Maybe yesteryear is all we had But now the moment is all we can share Can't you feel the passion in my heart beating? Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe
Aleksandra Posted July 14, 2010 Posted July 14, 2010 I don't know where I will be tomorrowSo please stay with me now Live every day as it is your last one... Victor, this poem delighted. Very sincere, very simple. The lyrical tone attracted me, and makes me want to read it again. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia
tonyv Posted July 24, 2010 Posted July 24, 2010 Reads like a love song, Victor. I like the poem's uniform structure, and I can sense the emotions inside. Thanks for submitting it. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
badger11 Posted July 25, 2010 Posted July 25, 2010 So please stay with me nowSo tomorrow doesn't come our way Felt the moment Vic badge Quote
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