Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted July 11, 2010 Share Posted July 11, 2010 Fate has changed my destiny. I once was married. But that is a different world now then the realityi no live in. The day after my marriage instead of starting my honeymoon my new wife andI joyce decided to rest and spend the day going to church and spending time with family. Everyone wondered why we where not humping are brains out lots of laughter. I prayed to God and gave a tithe. What I asked for was a wayout of working seventeen hours a day six days a week and embazzling money from the company I was working for. I also asked for a blessed marriage. II nam mad at God. Mylife became a whirlwind of turbulence in a ar accident one month after my marriage. My marriage soon resolved itself in a horrible divorce. I hadn't realized that most of my friends fond memories of so many wonderful times had faded into the wind. Lucifer came to me that beautiful angeof light. This happened after my family Baker acted me. This act gives the right for family and social services in the united states to commit a family member. Lucifer was so beautiful that i kissed him on the cheek. Never thinking about homosexuality as wrong. Part two. I now would met so many people some I truly care for such as Lauren. Another world another time I guess or suppose I reckon. I had now taken a new adventure and chapter in my life. While I loved my ex had a regret with my second cousin Julie. I now live near my parents thousands of miles away from where I grew up in south Florida. I write Poetry in simple terms. I'm on the internet and that is my world now my baby and my family. Since March 1992 when first logged onto the net. to all the wonderful people I have incountered over the years. Many of whom I have lost touch with. Thank you for the memories I weep for what I now know God/dess bless Victor Michael now paralyzed and living in a nursing home. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted July 14, 2010 Share Posted July 14, 2010 A great deal of raw material which could be one of your best poems yet (If you have the time/energy/desire to re-work) Of course, this is only an opinion- but the intention I read was a beautiful and sad metaphor about presenting the two worlds of your life with clear emotions and the transformation wrought... My only worry is the (what appears to me) homophobic Lucifer homosexuality tie in (?)- I am probably wrong since you are far too clever of a gnostic Christian to make that kind of bigoted judgement- But none the less, it makes me personally a bit uncomfortable... Many Thanks for sharing! DC&J Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted July 14, 2010 Author Share Posted July 14, 2010 My only worry is the (what appears to me) homophobic Lucifer homosexuality tie in (?)- I am probably wrong since you are far too clever of a gnostic Christian to make that kind of bigoted judgement- But none the less, it makes me personally a bit uncomfortable... Many Thanks for sharing! DC&J Hi DC. Im not homophobic lol or a homosexual. I don't believe in hell for onething. As for lucifer he isv a angel of light in my experiences. could i be decieved or halluncinating absolutely i was high as a kite during those experiences. if i cut than the story doesnt get out everything i thought came to heart or experience would be hard to reword. i could change some stanza sequences or change a word here or there but i just a amatuer with word usage. my tutor died over 1o years ago. she wouldve helped me for free. she went to the same church as me. i know how to speak proper englih and elizabethian english because of her. bless her heart. i thank for the feedback. i will make another version but this is how i really want it to be. if you knew why sometimes my poems are not perfect you might be bedazzled at some of my believes im not aftaid to kiss a male. im not going to fondle his genitals or have homesexual thoughts i think women are amzaing. i think men re ugly lol. on the other hand i believe angels if they really are that can be a bird or a shark or a lion or a whale and also a female or male so now you know why i worded it the way i did. many thanks for your insight. you ate more intelligent than i am in the english language. my fault for slackin in school. victor. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted July 16, 2010 Share Posted July 16, 2010 Lucifer was so beautiful that i kissed him on the cheek. Never thinking about homosexuality as wrong. This made me think why 'Lucifer' is a 'he' , and from there why 'Jesus' was a 'he'. It makes me wonder why there are so many 'he's at the 'top' in religions. badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted July 17, 2010 Author Share Posted July 17, 2010 hi badge, as for my world. i worship the holy spirit of the god/dess/ i believe this entity is a she and the holy ghost named sophia not like you have to read my other poems but i have mention female angels and sophia god's wife in my poems badge. victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fader Posted July 17, 2010 Share Posted July 17, 2010 Victor you speak with honesty here and that is what gives this it's strength. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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