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Larsen M. Callirhoe
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Larsen M. Callirhoe

Fate has changed my destiny.

I once was married.

But that is a different world now

then the realityi no live in.

 

The day after my marriage

instead of starting my honeymoon

my new wife andI joyce decided to rest

and spend the day going to church

and spending time with family.

 

Everyone wondered why

we where not humping

are brains out lots of laughter.

 

I prayed to God

and gave a tithe.

 

What I asked for was

a wayout of working

seventeen hours a day

six days a week

and embazzling money

from the company

I was working for.

I also asked for a

blessed marriage.

 

II nam mad at God.

Mylife became a whirlwind

of turbulence

in a ar accident

one month after my marriage.

 

My marriage soon resolved

itself in a horrible divorce.

 

I hadn't realized

that most of my friends

fond memories of so

many wonderful times

had faded into the wind.

 

Lucifer came to me

that beautiful angeof light.

This happened after my family

Baker acted me.

 

This act gives the right

for family and social services

in the united states

to commit a family member.

 

Lucifer was so beautiful

that i kissed him on the cheek.

Never thinking

about homosexuality

as wrong.

 

Part two.

 

I now would met

so many people

some I truly care for

such as Lauren.

 

Another world

another time I guess

or suppose I reckon.

 

I had now taken

a new adventure

and chapter in my life.

 

While I loved my ex

had a regret

with my second cousin

Julie.

 

I now live near my parents

thousands of miles away

from where I grew up

in south Florida.

 

I write Poetry in simple terms.

 

I'm on the internet

and that is my world now

my baby and my family.

 

Since March 1992

when first logged onto

the net.

 

to all the wonderful

people I have incountered

over the years.

 

Many of whom

I have lost touch with.

 

Thank you for the memories

I weep for what I now know

 

God/dess bless Victor Michael

now paralyzed and living

in a nursing home.

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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A great deal of raw material which could be one of your best poems yet (If you have the time/energy/desire to re-work) Of course, this is only an opinion- but the intention I read was a beautiful and sad metaphor about presenting the two worlds of your life with clear emotions and the transformation wrought...

 

My only worry is the (what appears to me) homophobic Lucifer homosexuality tie in (?)- I am probably wrong since you are far too clever of a gnostic Christian to make that kind of bigoted judgement- But none the less, it makes me personally a bit uncomfortable...

 

Many Thanks for sharing!

 

DC&J

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My only worry is the (what appears to me) homophobic Lucifer homosexuality tie in (?)- I am probably wrong since you are far too clever of a gnostic Christian to make that kind of bigoted judgement- But none the less, it makes me personally a bit uncomfortable...

 

Many Thanks for sharing!

 

DC&J

 

 

Hi DC. Im not homophobic lol or a homosexual. I don't believe in hell for onething. As for lucifer he isv a angel of light in my experiences. could i be decieved or halluncinating absolutely i was high as a kite during those experiences. if i cut than the story doesnt get out everything i thought came to heart or experience would be hard to reword. i could change some stanza sequences or change a word here or there but i just a amatuer with word usage. my tutor died over 1o years ago. she wouldve helped me for free. she went to the same church as me. i know how to speak proper englih and elizabethian english because of her. bless her heart.

 

i thank for the feedback. i will make another version but this is how i really want it to be. if you knew why sometimes my poems are not perfect you might be bedazzled at some of my believes im not aftaid to kiss a male. im not going to fondle his genitals or have homesexual thoughts i think women are amzaing. i think men re ugly lol. on the other hand i believe angels if they really are that can be a bird or a shark or a lion or a whale and also a female or male so now you know why i worded it the way i did.

 

many thanks for your insight. you ate more intelligent than i am in the english language. my fault for slackin in school.

 

victor.

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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Lucifer was so beautiful

that i kissed him on the cheek.

Never thinking

about homosexuality

as wrong.

This made me think why 'Lucifer' is a 'he' , and from there why 'Jesus' was a 'he'. It makes me wonder why there are so many 'he's at the 'top' in religions.

 

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hi badge,

 

as for my world. i worship the holy spirit of the god/dess/ i believe this entity is a she and the holy ghost named sophia not like you have to read my other poems but i have mention female angels and sophia god's wife in my poems badge.

 

victor

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