Time Has No End. (CA)

[Larsen M. Callirhoe]

Time Has No End.

 

When I look into your eyes.

I see a reflection

as though it was a mirror.

 

Time has no end

like the eternal sea.

 

I whisper words to you

from the well of my heart.

 

This journey we are on

Passes by like the wind

that touches our souls.

 

We walk along the shores

side by side, hand in hand.

 

When we go for a swim.

We cannot control the tides.

High and low, they toss to and fro.

 

Destiny and Fate

they go hand in hand.

 

Every moment

I am away from you

know I am always

dreaming of you.

 

Time has no end.

Every moment

passes us on by.

It is just a breath

of what we considered

the truth to be.

 

Know I will always be there.

Every breath we consume.

Every heart we are beating.

 

Time has no end

Every thought is like the wind.

Every cloud a thought

That flows into the horizon.

Know I will always be with you.

For we are eternal in SPIRIT

Edited July 19, 2010 by Larsen M. Callirhoe

[Aleksandra]

Victor, my friend. Sensitive poem, as usual. Very simple, honest and melancholic. It's written in very natural way. It feels nice, it's like a dream.

 

Aleksandra

[dr_con]

I agree with Aleks- perfectly straightforward- and well well, written,perfectly honed and just a nice piece...

 

Dr. Con

[Larsen M. Callirhoe]

thanks aleks and dr con aka juris. im not sure about this poem. i think i could tidy it up some. thank you for the nice comments but i like the harmony of the poem but not its melody. i think i need a critique just to see were i am needing to polish this up some.

 

victor