Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted August 9, 2010 Posted August 9, 2010 Here I am standing alone in the pouring rain. Yesterday has come and passed. What will tomorrow bring my way. Sometimes love is hard. You just have to grin and bare. Yes it is a fool's game. A chilld plays after dark. When it is thundering and lightning out. Sometimes we dream and it fades into the sunlight. Sometimes we hear the music playing a song we hold dearto us. I wish life could be more simple than lighting a match. When all you do is tear us apart. You have burned down the bridges that unite us. What we once held so sacred and dear. Is now in flames burning down like the house we used to share. A photograph a memory we hold dear. Nothing is left in the cold pouring rain. What if tomorrow never came our way Yes it is memories that we hold dare. It is a fool's game Nothing but a child playing I look in the mirror and see all the tears. Where have all the years gone by when we used to laugh and play. Now we are old and grey. Playing in the rain Nothing but a fool's game. Yes dreams are nice but they do fade into the night. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe
tonyv Posted August 10, 2010 Posted August 10, 2010 Victor, I enjoyed the continuum, how you made your way from the literal: A chilld plays after dark. When it is thundering and lightning out. to the metaphorical: Now we are old and grey. Playing in the rain Nothing but a fool's game. Yes dreams are nice but they do fade into the night. "A Fool's Game" it is. Well done! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted August 10, 2010 Author Posted August 10, 2010 tony i did say my nextthree poems would be filled with hidden metaphors. you have to knowabout my life to see them. in my response to just another day i said that. i haveone more called on the shore im still working on it and might not post it for a week or two to give time for readersto scope my three recent entries victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe
RHommel Posted August 11, 2010 Posted August 11, 2010 Hi Victor, I like the subtle rhyming and lyrical cadence of this when I read it aloud, which I am wont to do with just about every poem I encounter. :) Love poems in particular are of great fascination to me... and I really enjoyed your metaphors. Thank you. ~Rachel Quote
Aleksandra Posted September 22, 2010 Posted September 22, 2010 Metaphorical and meaningful poem. Emotions are not missing in none of your poems. Always heartfelt. Thank you for this softness of poetry. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia
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