rumisong Posted September 17, 2010 Posted September 17, 2010 I am FRESH AIR today among friends not forgotten by my not forgetting these wondersouls of word and love beings that wander leaves and again lost to the longing forever placed in significant boxes next to special crockery and well used spoons nested in the most used cupboard of the house safe to arrive hungry and know a meal to arrive tired and have a footstool delivered and a cat to warm the legs freely curled and comforted I have a song for you the dulcimer has survived the journey so you might soften your labor for a day, or an evening have a drink with the breeze and me living this fire sidle up to the bench the work of liberation is our calling now you play the pots, should your flute not be near the kitchen staff wont mind cheese is all they want and I want you here and grateful warmed bricks and a hearts repose Quote
dr_con Posted September 18, 2010 Posted September 18, 2010 Good to read you again Rumi! And what a delightful re-introduction- I loved the sense and scent of this- I was warmed and inspired by this lyrical ode to home and the moment;-) DC&J Quote thegateless.org
tonyv Posted September 18, 2010 Posted September 18, 2010 Lyrical and lovely, Rumisong. Welcome home. have a drinkwith the breeze and me I'll join you on the porch. Tony :) Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
rumisong Posted September 18, 2010 Author Posted September 18, 2010 Thanks you guys! thats just what it was for me yesterday, a homecoming, when I dropped by- as if Id been away on a long voyage, and found familiar cobbles beneath my feet, and the signs of old friends left in the window- that they were in the fields at work just thn, but we would meet up later on the porch... it felt just like that! warmth and smiles and song very glad to be back :) (I have a bit more steady internet connection now, for a while at least- and hopefully that, and being here will get me to some more poet-like-stuff, yes?) Quote
Lake Posted September 23, 2010 Posted September 23, 2010 See who's back! What a warm feel this poem delivered. Loved "fresh air" and the household items and the cat, warmed bricks. Welcome back! Lake Quote
Aleksandra Posted October 9, 2010 Posted October 9, 2010 Home, sweet home. :). Wonderful expressed poem. Many of you guys, are expressing yourself so easily when comes to some nice feeling as in this poem. So, I am wondering how you do that?! Rumi, how you did this, here you have the honor to answer me :). Why for me is always a big deal to write something like this, and I never come up with a relaxing and nice poem?! Much enjoyed this poem, and I loved the part about a cat to warm the legs. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia
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